名师点评网友BEC初级作文(1)
日期:2010-05-12
网友作文三:
Dear all:
The file system will shtudown [1]due to system maintainance next Friday.
It will take a full day to finish this job.[2]
Please do not acccess the [3]file server that day and backup your files one it[4].
名师修改意见:
[1]够干练了,语法错误多。 Be shut down
[2]去掉
[3]Access to
[4]On it?
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