Error Correction

几千年来，孩子在社会的地位不尽相同，这主要是受不同文化和宗教的影响。在古代，不想要的孩子有时被抛弃，被处死，被剥削，甚至被用作宗教祭 品。在近几百年来，在西方对孩子态度有了很大的改变，但孩子们经常长时间工作而得到很少或几乎没有报酬。直到最近，才有法律保护未成年人，使得他们有接受医疗和教育的机会。

71. 【参考答案】effected→affected【解题技巧】词性错误。【详细解答】 effect 是名词，影响，而此处需要动词，因此改作affect
72. 【参考答案】exploiting→exploited【解题技巧】语态错误。【详细解答】 此处需要被动语态，因为孩子们是被剥削。
73. 【参考答案】to→ to[KG-1*4]【解题技巧】及物动词用法错误。【详细解答】 reach 是及物动词，后应接宾语，而不需要介词。
74. 【参考答案】with→toward【解题技巧】介词搭配错误。【详细解答】 attitude 后接介词toward。
75. 【参考答案】work→worked【解题技巧】时态错误。【详细解答】 此处应用一般现在时才符合全篇的安排。
76. 【参考答案】on→for【解题技巧】 介词搭配错误。【详细解答】 concern 后接for 表示“对…表示关注”
77. 【参考答案】any→some【解题技巧】 词语用法错误。【详细解答】 any只用于疑问句和否定句，而some 一般用于肯定句。
78. 【参考答案】passing→passed【解题技巧】语态错误。【详细解答】 此处需要被动语态，而不是主动语态。
79. 【参考答案】for→to【解题技巧】 介词固定搭配。【详细解答】 attentive 后接介词to。
80. 【参考答案】reserving→reserved【解题技巧】语态错误。【详细解答】 此处需要被动语态。

Writing

本文为议论文。可以分四段写。在第一段中提出自己的观点。第二段列举大学生从事业余工作的好处，并举出论据;第三段举出论据，论证业余工作的弊端;最后提出自己的建议。论证方法可采用比较和对比法，业余工作的利与弊的比较对比;还可以用例证法;因果分析论证法。关联词可以用first, second(表示列举);besides(表示补充：而且);however(表示对比：可是，然而)等。

On Part-time Jobs

People have different views on whether college students should take part-time jobs. I think part- time jobs have both their advantages and disadvantages.

First, part-time jobs may offer students an opportunity to display their ability and help them apply their knowledge in practice, and in return, their experience will make them know better what they have learned in class and books. Second, part-time jobs in business can foster a sense of competition, which they need　in future. Part-time jobs make students more confident in themselves because through the work they can realize their own value and prove that they are capable　people. Third, it helps students develop a sense of independence, and helps relieve their parents’ economic burdens. With the money earned, they can buy whatever they need for their study.

However, part-time jobs often distract students’ attention from their studies, and some students even play truant. It is evident that they can hardly focus　their attention on their study if they work several hours on the job, for they　may be preoccupied with how to improve their work most of the time. Though students who have part -time jobs may relieve their parents’ economic burdens, their　early contact with society may expose them to some social ills.

Owing to the advantages and disadvantages involved in working part-time, students have to strike a balance between their study and the job. The main task of students is to study hard and learn what is needed for their future career, social experience can be gained after graduation.